When I hold this package it is crunchy it hold something that can give you fresh breathe. This is small and looks looks like a ring this ring is white. it feels smooth and has word engraved on it. when looking at this freshening white ring it looks like it would not taste like anything to begin with but when you put it in your mouth it is refreshing. When it is your mouth it feel like you are walking in the snow or even where there a cold breeze hitting your face. it makes me feel refreshed and brand new, you can bite into it and it makes you feel like you might be walking through a blizzard because of how cold and fresh your mouth will feel. you can suck on this refreshing ring for a long time and it will get smaller and smaller.
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This is a great description of the treat! I love how you compare its refreshing sensation to walking in the snow or feeling a cool breeze. Your imagery really conveys that crisp feeling. Great job capturing the joy of this simple treat!
ReplyDeleteGood start with using sensory details to describe this experience. Keep pushing yourself!
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